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Well, looka that. Finally, a colored sketch!! This is what happens when I watch too much DBZ and Lion King 2. Eeyup.
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Here, the critique I promised you. I DIDN'T FORGET ABOUT IT, YIKES.
Firstly, let me start with this; yes I like this quite a ton. One the greatest pictures of yours, if not the best. However, some things can be improved. (This is where I get mean).
The picture lacks atmosphere. A lot. The characters don't blend into the background. They're just floating on a random background, much like a collage. The lack of shading is one of the reasons why it's like this. Yes, I know you have trouble with shading, but just ask me for some tips in class yo. I'll help you out.
Also, thunder isn't yellow. It's white with a very pale blue glow if anything; here's an example maritimeweather.ca/wp-content/…. And judging that there's a thunderstorm going on, the sky should have been filled with gray clouds, hence the blue here doesn't make much sense! About that dust cloud, it should have been behind Sonic. Even if it's being blown away by the wind, it should have so kind of perspective from behind the character. Same with the trail, that just looks like he descended from the sky to fuck shit up (or maybe he did, I don't know anything about Sonic lol).
And that coloring. It's... well, sloppy. Try not pressing the pencils too hard into the paper and keep coloring in one direction only. If you don't know what I mean with this, just ask me and I'll show you in person.
I must also say that you mimic the Sonic style very well! Just hope that doesn't get in the way when you try to develop an original and personal style.
I think that's it? For any insults or complaints, just come at me. I can take 'em.
Hope this helps, Dan out.